Wednesday, March 7, 2012

MANUSCRIPT ASSESSMENT AT GIRRAHWEEN ON MAY FIFTH

Here is the timetable for the day at Girrahween
WITH GLENDA MILLARD AND CARMEL BIRD

There will be a group of no more than six writers.

They will all have forwarded by email a half page
summary of their manuscript, and two sample pages
of the work. Carmel and Glenda will have read and discussed
these documents together before the workshop.

On arrival at Girrahween writers hand in hard copy of the manuscripts they
plan to discuss and work on on the day.

10 am - 10.30 am
Glenda and Carmel welcome the writers with refreshments.
During this session the writers introduce themselves to the group and briefly
outline the nature and scope of individual projects.

10.30 - 10.45
Writers make written notes of some of the aspects of writing they would
like to cover during the day. Carmel and Glenda collect these notes.

10. 45 - 11.30
Glenda and Carmel give presentations of their own experiences as writers.

11.30 - 12.30
Carmel and Glenda answer the questions submitted in writing, and
broaden the discussion.

12.30 to 1.30
A delicious country style lunch will be provided.

During lunch Glenda and Carmel will withdraw to get an overview of
the manuscripts, and discuss with each other various approaches to
them.

1.30 to 3.30 pm
Individual consultations with both Carmel and Glenda.
Writers who are not in consultation at any time will be free to discuss
things with other writers, and to explore the house and garden.
Writers will receive notes on their work, and a range of suggestions for
future treatment of their manuscripts, as well as details of possibilities for
publication.

3.30 to 4pm
A general discussion led by Glenda and Carmel.

NOTE
Girrahween(which means 'place of flowers') is a delightful Victorian house in Maldon, a picturesque goldfields
town in central Victoria.
Bendigo resident Glenda Millard, who is a celebrated author of children's picture books and young
adult fiction, uses Girrahween as a house where she writes, and to which she invites
writers and illustrators for various literary events.
The house is furnished in keeping with the Victorian era, and the broad garden is filled with both native
and exotic plants.
This place is a haven and an inspiration for writers and illustrators, and people who come to events here
can enjoy visiting the sights of Maldon and sampling the cafes and the lovely local B&Bs.

Address:
Girrahween
108 High Street, Maldon.

Saturday, February 11, 2012

MANUSCRIPT ASSESSMENT

YOUR MANUSCRIPT

Do you have a manuscript in development, or even completed? Are you looking for a first assessment? Picture Book, Young Adult, General Fiction, Non-Fiction, Memoir?

Authors Glenda Millard and Carmel Bird will host a

SATURDAY of consultation and assessment

AT GIRRAHWEEN in MALDON

On May 5th from 10am to 4pm

GIRRAHWEEN is a enchanting Victorian house filled with books and pictures and vintage toys in the gold-rush town of Maldon, a place that has for years been a source of inspiration to writers and artists.

Girrahween looks serenely out onto a garden of native and exotic plants. This blissful haven has become a favourite destination for writers and illustrators.

The permanent writer-in-residence at Girrahween is Glenda Millard whose many picture books and young adult fiction are among the most beloved of readers, teachers and librarians. Glenda will be joined by novelist Carmel Bird to offer you clear and creative assessment of your work.

A weekend in Maldon places the visitor in the heart of a leisurely world of luxurious B&Bs, fine food and wine, galleries and specialty shops in the goldfields region. One of the literary and artistic events at Girrahween can be the focus of your visit.

The fee for the day is $250 (includes lunch)

See: www.carmelbird.com & www.carmel-bird.blogspot.com & http://www.allenandunwin.com/default.aspx?page=626

For enrolment & details: carmel@carmelbird.com & silksister@gmail.com

GIRRAHWEEN is at 108 High St Maldon

Sunday, February 5, 2012

FACT AND FICTION IN MEMOIR

Fact and Fiction in Memoir

Among the fifteen people in my memoir-writing group at Writers Victoria in January there were two sisters. I set the group a writing exercise where they would recall a significant clock or watch from their early lives, and write about it for ten minutes. After this I invited people to read out what they had written. Both sisters, without consulting each other, wrote about their grandfather’s fob watch. As we all listened to the second sister’s account, we could recognize the grandfather, but the funny thing was that one sister recalled a lovely golden chain, while the other remembered a silver one. Since the chain is now lost, we will probably never know whether it was silver or gold.

Workshops are often enlivened by moments not unlike this one, but I thought this textbook example of the behaviour of memory was worth noting. If these sisters can’t agree on the nature of the chain which they observed in the relatively recent past, just how much can ever be believed? And how much does this matter? When you are writing memoir you are in one sense fabricating a new past from the materials your memory offers you, you are constructing something like a piece of fiction, in some ways, while trying (I suppose) to stick to the truth. The truth as you know it.

Also worth noting is the fact that the group, as groups frequently do, decided to keep in touch with each other by email after the workshop.

I have been astonished by the energy and commitment of this particular group. They continue to write and to share their work with each other, and to offer clear-eyed yet always encouraging criticism of the writing. I think most of them will persevere and will write various kinds of memoir, some for general publication, some for family and friends. And I know they will all remember, in one way or another, the lovely lesson of the gold and silver chains.

NB

In May 2012 I will be Assessing and Commenting on Manuscripts of Memoir as well as Fiction at Girrahween in Maldon, Central Victoria. More details later. Contact me on carmel@carmelbird.com

Monday, January 23, 2012


image one: Ivan Bilibin

image two: George Cruikshank


Consider this sentence from 'The Golden Bird' by the Brothers Grimm: "So he sat down, and the fox began to run, and away they went over stock and stone so quick that their hair whistled in the wind."

The image of the fox and its passenger by George Cruikshank, coupled with this sentence from ‘The Golden Bird’ are lodged in my memories of long ago. The book, in a dark blue leather cover with fine gold embossing, was the collected stories of the Brothers Grimm. I received it when I was six and I pored over the images and the narratives for ever after.

What engaged me was the mystery embedded not just in the plots and characters, but also in the language and the rhythms. And in the pictures which seem to lift themselves out of the writing and dance with a life of their own.

My first experience of this book was just after the end of World War Two, when books were rarer and more precious than they have become. I write this at a time when books are on the endangered list, so in my lifetime I have seen them move from rare to very common to rare again. Not as rare as they were in the forties, but not as common as they were a very few years ago. I say this by way of establishing context, placing my personal relationship to the conventions of the fairy tale in time, and also, I realize in place.

For I held the lovely blue book in my hands in a Tasmanian country town, far away from Cruikshank’s London and the German forests of the Grimms. The fairy tales and their illustrations were the entrance to the mysteries of unrealities, yet they were also in many respects parallel to everyday reality. Words and pictures had the power to carry a child’s mind into weird places, to shift a child’s vision to contemplations of beauty and horror, and to move a child’s emotions towards terror and joy and pity. These tales fulfilled the promise that there is something else, somewhere else; that there is mystery.

I see them now as the messengers of the nature of ‘story’. A story, in this context, is a narrative that might have happened somewhere, and that is taken, for the time being, to be true. When you talk about a story in this way, you have belief and disbelief, reality and mystery, running with each other, somewhat like the man and the fox with their hair whistling in the wind. And people who move from reading stories to writing stories are, I think probably always, picking up the magic and setting out to work with it.

Part of the enchantment for children (and adults too) is the incantatory nature of the tales, and it is this element as much as any, I think, that binds the mind of a writer to these stories. ‘Once upon a time’ and ‘there were three brothers’ and ‘happily ever after’ are all implicated in both the stimulus of and the response to the fairy tale. The height of beauty and the murky depths of the grotesque are frankly placed before the reader in a kind of poetry, a kind of sing-song that works its way over and over again into the mind and heart.

You can of course become a novelist without actually reading these stories over and over as a child, but in my own case I am certain that my conviction that I had to write fiction had at least part of its origin in the fairy tales, particularly in the blue book with the Cruikshank illustrations. And those illustrations were black and white lithographs. All the colour they delivered was done by line, by shade, and a kind of leaping confidence in the rightness of the picture’s madness.

Another illustrator who nourished my imagination was Ivan Bilibin, a Russian who died in 1942. It is a mystery to me how Pushkin’s story ‘The Tale of Tsar Saltan’, illustrated by Bilbin, came to be with the other books in the house. There was a strange shelf constructed by my father, stuck rather high on the wall to the right of the fireplace, and shaped like a magazine rack. In this rack there were thin children’s books such as works by Mabel Lucie Atwell, and also the Pushkin.

The pictures are far, far from the black hobgoblins of Cruikshank; they are softly coloured in muted shades, highly patterned, and often contained within formal borders of decorative motifs from Russian folk art. The image here is a dazzling example of the mysterious vision Bilibin’s work brought to my child’s mind. ‘And behold, to his amaze, a great city met his gaze.’ The reader feels she is part of the foreground where the couple are held in soft shadow, feels she can look out at the fabulous walled city on the hillside in the distance, could walk the yellow path that leads through the archway in the wall, and enter the streets of the ‘great city’.

It was many years later, in the seventies, that the Russian picture books Bilibin illustrated became available in Australia and I collected several of them. The pictures are absolutely entrancing to me. I have never written a story bearing any recognizable inspiration from them, but I know they have a powerful and magical effect on me. They are so grand and confident and utterly mysterious. They are highly serene and yet they promise vast journeys, great narratives, deep truths. They use the most wonderful shades of green, for one thing.

I think what the stories mainly express is the human longing for the mystery of what is out of reach, but which must surely exist somewhere behind an invisible membrane of some kind. And I know that I was certainly captivated early on by the promise embedded in the tales, and that my writing is a kind of participation in the search for whatever it is that is concealed. When the strangeness of the tale was bound up with the visual magic of Cruikshank and Bilibin, the lifetime contract between myself and stories, the creation of stories, was sealed. I am overstating the case, for there were other influences, but the fairy stories and these two illustrators were clearly influences on how I now spend my time.

(This memoir is from the catalogue of the Happy Ever After Travelling Exhibition 2011/12 from the Newcastle Library.)

Tuesday, January 10, 2012

Finola Fox


Penguin will publish my new children's picture book
The Fabulous Finola Fox in May 2012.
Illustrations are by Kerry Argent.
It's the story of an urban fox who collects shoes.
She is on a quest to find the pair to a gorgeous
feathered green shoe she found in an alley.
She finds more than she bargained for, including
romance.

Tuesday, December 6, 2011

Library at Borroloola

BORROLOOLA LIBRARY
The Library at Borroloola is a place where the books and the building have long since been eaten by white ants. The story of the Borroloola Library is one of the most poignant and mythic of all library stories. If books and libraries are in crisis in 2011, and perhaps they are, imagine if you will, the tale of the library in Borroloola.
Borroloola is 1500 kilometres South East of Darwin, and 60 kilometres from the sea on the Gulf of Carpentaria. In the 1890s a mounted policeman, Cornelius Power, established the library. It is probable that he wrote to the governor of Victoria asking for donations of books. A thousand handsome books apparently came, by ship, and were kept in the jail as there was nowhere else for them to go. Later on there were three thousand books in total. This library became the centre of cultural life in the area, a handful of bushies and a large population of indigenous people borrowing and reading and holding regular open air public discussion on the things they read about. The collection contained the leather bound books that an educated Edwardian Englishman might have had in his house. Dickens, Bronte, Henry James, Kipling, Tennyson, Shakespeare, Aristotle, Plutarch, Homer, Virgil, the Bible – covered in canvas jackets. Ernestine Hill described it as ‘a kindly light of sanity to men half mad with loneliness’. By the late 1950s the library was in an almost total state of decay. Some of the books had been sent to Darwin. But many of them had been borrowed and never returned, and what remained would eventually be eaten by white ants, the pages of works of great literature ending up in the material of the ant hills. When David Attenborough made a documentary about it in the early sixties, he reported that the only remaining book was The Imitation of Christ by Thomas a Kempis, and that although the title page was legible, most of the interior had been eaten.
Sic transit Gloria mundi.

Saturday, December 3, 2011

Library Thoughts

Library Thoughts
Libraries are changing. Books are changing. There might be a crisis in libraries and books. Are they disappearing? Does it matter?
I was browsing through old copies of TLS and read a review (by Roderick Conway Morris) of a book ‘Venetian Navigators’ by Andrea di Robilant. The book’s about fourteenth century explorations of the far far northern regions of the planet. The reviewer suggests that as the Arctic ice-cap melts and North-West and North-East Passages open up to navigation, the areas explored by the Zen brothers in the fourteenth century will become central to world trade.
A section of the review caught my imagination, reminding me of the role and relevance of both books and libraries. It’s a lovely story about what can happen in a library when you are looking for one thing and your stumble upon something else.
QUOTE from TLS, June 3, 2011.
“Several years ago di Robilant, while researching an altogether different topic, happened upon a miniature volume in the Old and Rare Book Collection at the Marciana Library on Piazza San Marco in Venice. It measured about six by four inches, and glued to the back of it was a larger, crisply engraved wood-cut map. The author was the Venetian nobleman Nicolo Zen, and the title ‘On the Discovery of the Islands of Frislanda, Eslanda, Engroneland, Estotiland and Icaria made by the two Zen Brothers under the Artic Pole.’ The book was published in 1558.”
The accidental discovery of the little old book led to the writing of the book under review. I love stories like that. And I hope libraries and books don’t disappear.